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Still Standing

Where were you when my world fell apart? The Sun darkened and the Moon just fled. All had been done and all had been said. And ripped to shreds was my beating heart. Even the Seas began to part. And the Mountain tops spread. I lay there completely dead. Even the Stars I could not chart. If only you knew, If only you were there, If only you had a clue! If only life had been fair! I’d turn the clocks back, Still standing dead in my track!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/2/2013 8:26:00 AM
What a declaration of sacrifice. Beautiful! I hope it's worth it. :)
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