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Still Life With Fruit

STILL LIFE WITH FRUIT In spite of the orchard A far white moon dominates Its sick room presence lifts the eye Still life with fruit – Crescent dish with bananas, apples, pears - A wrinkled bed spread falls off the sky In all an angular canvas, A drowsy cubist squint, Imposed shapes, lines – Picasso pie This pointed, silver vase pokes through Its ample gift of flowers, Destroys the view – Oh, my! I’ve come to, limp right arm yet hangs over, Attendant tells, “Breakfast time. You hungry? Let’s sit up. There! Good guy.” Dave Austin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/15/2014 9:10:00 AM
You are amazing and so creative. Love the bedspread falling off the sky.
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Date: 10/10/2014 12:01:00 PM
I cared for my ailing parents and now just my mother. How sad we can not live out our lives whole. Love this poem.
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Date: 10/9/2014 12:20:00 PM
Cute one got a chuckle..Thanks for the visits to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara
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Date: 10/8/2014 3:09:00 PM
Excellent use of contrast and I love the "Picasso pie" line. You always make me laugh. That last line sounds like something a person would say to a dog - "sit up, good boy," etc. If we keep our sense of humor, infirmity isn't nearly so bad. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/7/2014 5:31:00 PM
From beginning to end this poem drew me in Daver. This is so cleverly and creatively written. I hope you are feeling better today. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 10/7/2014 2:19:00 PM
delectably scribed, daver... a flavored write of the day!.. huggs
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Date: 10/7/2014 1:35:00 PM
I favorite'd this.
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Date: 10/7/2014 12:24:00 PM
Hi Daver, a very nice hang out, Enjoy your day, Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/6/2014 11:04:00 PM
Picasso pie..thats great! Hope your feeling better. I worry! BG
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Date: 10/6/2014 6:12:00 PM
oh my , Still Life has more than one meaning here. GREAT poetry, DAver, great imagery! and depressing!
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Date: 10/6/2014 3:37:00 PM
love the humour in this write, Daver. Hope you are well and having a good week, my friend
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