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Still

Still as a summer morn.. a youth lovelorn.. the veiled dawn.. a heart that mourns.. a portrait drawn.. of memories time worn.. ambitions withdrawn.. a promise forsworn.. an idea inborn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/18/2012 5:18:00 PM
Beautifully portrayed Brian, Thank you for sharing your gifts, Brenda : )
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Date: 7/6/2012 11:39:00 PM
This is beautiful, Brian. Love that ending.
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Date: 7/6/2012 3:55:00 PM
Wonderful write, I enjoyed this a lot. It's very elegant. Thanks for sharing. -Becca
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