Stifled

The sun rose ablaze against blue__ Cobalt blue clouds, skies icy cold stifled my desire for porch view oh! just a second to gaze_ behold.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/1/2013 12:34:00 PM

Sara , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. Thank you for sharing the nice rhyme...pd

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/23/2012 11:00:00 AM

So you mansged to nip out in the nippy air Sara, Wishing you Gods blessings for the season.."

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/22/2012 4:16:00 PM

love this Sara, have a wonderful festive season...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/21/2012 9:27:00 PM

Sara, stopping by with my warmest thoughts my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

Rollo West

Date: 12/20/2012 11:00:00 AM

Hi Sara, what a great write my friend, loved the pause in the last line. Rollo

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/20/2012 10:37:00 AM

gaze and take in the view form your porch Sara, it sounds just heavenly xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/20/2012 8:45:00 AM

This is a tremendously beautiful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this awesome and wondrous poem this morning! You have inspired me to write my own sun, clouds, and sky poem Sara! It's formulating in my mind as I write this, we'll see how it goes, if I put it on the Soup or not! What a delightful piece you have written! I'm glad you shared it with us! Great Work!!