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STEPS

Eileen  Manassian Avatar Eileen  Manassian - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled STEPS which was written by poet Eileen Manassian. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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STEPS

R E J E C T I O N 
                       the first
                                  step 
                                       on the 
                                                slow 
                                                      descent
                                                                 into
                                                                       H E L L 

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  1. Date: 2/19/2013 8:04:00 AM
    You have done an awesome job with this form!! This IS how it feels when we're faced with rejection.

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 2/19/2013 8:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, my dear! Thanks for the visit! :)
  1. Date: 2/18/2013 5:54:00 PM
    Well I see EJECT there and parts left over....lol. hope this is just a poem

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 2/19/2013 8:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    What a lovely insight, Donna! :) Eject the offender, and don't worry about rejection!
  1. Date: 2/18/2013 4:30:00 PM
    I can see how this is true, creative way of exposing this demotion love xxx Hopefully your climbing the stairs up, joyously, with the help of the angels and their seraphic intervention xxx

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 2/19/2013 8:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes...I do a lot of climbing...up and down! Unfortunatley, it is the rhythm of my life! I've written a poem on it. Hugs!
  1. Date: 2/18/2013 4:15:00 PM
    Success begins with failure.

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 2/19/2013 8:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, it surely does!