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Just a moments rest Walking this uncertain path Rewards in heaven For the Still Life contest

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Date: 4/21/2010 7:19:00 PM

What an uplifting view. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/20/2010 7:58:00 PM

Congrats BG on your wonderful win in this contest... a wonderful write and win for u to add to your growing poetry portfolio...luv.. Linda-Marie

Kim M

Date: 4/20/2010 8:22:00 AM

Barbara, This wonderful expression in the "Still Life" contest actually has, both, literal and metaphorical meanings. How clever! Your comment in my entry for this contest made me chuckle with pride. Maybe I am beginning to get the hang of the senryu form! Thanks for giving me your kind support in all your comments.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/20/2010 4:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Still Life Barbara. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 4/19/2010 2:30:00 PM

Congratulations Barbara on your win in Raul's fine contest with this wonderful poem >> James,x

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/19/2010 12:40:00 PM

BG, congratulations with your placement in my contest...Raul

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2010 4:08:00 AM

It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Barbara. Wishing you the best in the contest. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/18/2010 6:08:00 PM

very nice senryu on human fobbiles? (can spell it LOL) and the 3rd line is a very good turn about! Light & Love

James Fraser

Date: 4/18/2010 11:39:00 AM

Wonderful take on the picture for Raul's contest. Good luck Barbara, Soup Mail >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/18/2010 7:19:00 AM

Beautiful, Barbara. That was quite an inspiring photo Raul posted. I think he'll like the spiritual nature of this senryu. There are just a few places left for haikus for the contest Iolanda and I are sponsoring. It's based on her photo of a flower. Hope you can hop to it and enter! Love, Carolyn

Rick Parise

Date: 4/18/2010 7:15:00 AM

Very nice Barbara~~Enjoyed~~Good luck love , faith and hope~~~~~~~~Rick