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Stepping Through Time

Stepping through time The song it was sad, such a desolate melody We danced to a weeping of horrific dreams Symphonies lost as the days go uncounted Steps keep the tempo, delusional scenes A pirouette frown lingers sorrowed poetically Her hand is cold, almost lifeless in mine And in those eyes, distant teardrops are echoing Staring the ending not far down the line Depression illumines the dark shadows crawling Moon light deceives like an absentee star Violins pluck out a lonely notation High pitched and weary like bells in a jar Stepping through time to the lonely days harboring Soon it will be but a waltzed aftermath Holding her close midst the demons now battling This, the last dance, me and Sylvia Plath
2/7/17 Written for the: Stepping Through Time Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 2/13/2017 3:01:00 PM
Congrats on your placement ,Chris
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2017 3:10:00 PM
Thanks so very much Donna.
Date: 2/10/2017 2:18:00 PM
You wrote a lovely poem. As I was reading it, I found myself being lost in it.Amanda And The Dog poem came to me in a dream. I remembered it, then wrote it down. this poem you wrote is a 7
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2017 12:09:00 PM
Thank you so very much Darlene
Date: 2/9/2017 10:59:00 PM
I am a fan of Sylvia Plath! "Pirouette frown, bells in a jar" Congrats on your win!
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2017 12:09:00 PM
Thank you so very much Kim
Date: 2/9/2017 3:47:00 AM
What a deep poem, just to suit Sylvia :) a winner:)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2017 12:08:00 PM
Thank you so very much Jo
Date: 2/8/2017 7:56:00 AM
Hi Chris, You've penned such a well written sad write. I must go and look this writer up. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven-Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 2/8/2017 9:53:00 AM
Thank you so very much Alexis, I am glad you liked this.
Date: 2/7/2017 8:45:00 PM
I'm trippin for this poem. A FAVE! Good luck Chris, wishing you all the best :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/8/2017 9:52:00 AM
Thank you so much Akkina.

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