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Maybe Someday In a honky tonk in Denver forty years ago I taught a strange brunette beauty how to dance real slow. Our eyes had met and locked when the lights were way down low. I was sure I knew her but just how I did not know. We spoke not a word as we swayed slowly to and fro, Her perfume had an eastern touch, Boston maybe so. Her iv'ry skin was perfect with that soft radiant glow That comes from satin sheets and a sailor's salt air blow. Our bodies moved to music that said she won't say no, We laughed together when they did the Cotton - Eyed Joe. Then she was gone - disappeared -and left a note just so. It said, "Thank you, cowboy! Maybe someday - Jackie O." 1/23/2017

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Date: 2/13/2017 2:50:00 PM
Congratulations Very enjoyable easy flow
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Date: 2/10/2017 10:49:00 PM
This is great. Moves like a rock and roll song. Love it. A 7. Congratulations on your trophy win.
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Date: 2/10/2017 1:40:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Larry, very well deserved win :) congratulations Hugs Eve
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 2/10/2017 2:00:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 2/10/2017 12:10:00 PM
Loved it!! Well deserving first place win Larry!! Made me smile!! Congratulations! Hugggs. Deb
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 2/10/2017 2:02:00 PM
Thank you, Deborah.....I appreciate the smile!!..Larry
Date: 2/9/2017 10:54:00 PM
Larry, this poem was just a lot if fun! Thanks and congrats on your top win!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 2/10/2017 2:03:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. I thought thte contest was fun in itslf!!..Larry
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/9/2017 11:19:00 PM
Of fun!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/9/2017 11:19:00 PM
Of fun!
Date: 1/24/2017 12:01:00 PM
Bravo, Larry. You hit the nail on the head with this excellent piece which is sure to hit the top of the winning chart! A-7! I thoroughly enjoyed the read! Best wishes. Pandita
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 1/25/2017 1:19:00 PM
What a genuinely nice comment, Pandita! Thank you for your words and your interest! You are most kind...Larry

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