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Stepping Over the Problem

Stepping Over The Problem I make my bed on the street Curled in a doorway under your feet You step over me we're unlikely to meet I'm covered in newspaper sometimes a plastic sheet trying to hold onto warmth just a small amount of heat Kelowna's councillors they are so wise They vote to shield your delicate eyes But where should we go can't they hear our cries Who will help them change perception so they realize they too one day might fall on hard times Then they might hope a different logic applies Instead vote on solutions We too want a home Do they think this is our first choice sleeping in a doorway all alone Can't they see we want food and comfort or have their hearts turned to stone Instead they'll equip a ticket giver with a dumbphone Because a few groan Saying they don't feel safe as I inconveniently suffer and moan. Maybe next time When you walk down the street It will only be rich people you'll meet I won't be sitting with a cup begging for something to eat the sad face you couldn't see from your mind erased Everything will seem perfect nothing out of place Or perhaps if you really cared I'd have a proper place to sleep with a bed and roof and yes a bit of precious heat. In response to Kelowna Council's decision to ban the homeless from sleeping on the streets.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/2/2016 11:20:00 AM
Ty for this impactful poem, Richard. I've gotten stepped over some in my life. I was homeless by choice (bad choice mind you), not by necessity. Beautiful insight with compelling criticism written w/such compassion. Powerful poem. Love always.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/2/2016 12:09:00 PM
Thanks again Freddie, your thoughtful comment made my morning.
Date: 12/1/2016 9:19:00 AM
I have written a poem on the homeless issue Rick but this story beggars belief - your title 'Stepping over the problem' says it all - absolutely heartbreaking that these poor souls are being 'evicted' from what is their home:-( hugs Jan xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/1/2016 9:33:00 AM
It is a huge problem everywhere. Hugs and thanks for commenting.
Date: 11/30/2016 2:32:00 PM
Richard I so love the line "they too one day may fall from their highs". These days there really is no job security. It really can happen to anyone. Loved the poem :) but hate what has happened!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/2/2016 12:29:00 PM
Thanks for your compassionate response Carol.
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Carol B.
Date: 12/1/2016 10:50:00 PM
It really is upsetting. Everyone deserves to be treated with respect and compassion. If only people would stop and realize what if they became down on their luck. How would they want to be treated. Very sad situation!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/1/2016 9:06:00 AM
You are right, but for the grace of God.
Date: 11/30/2016 12:41:00 PM
It seems that instead of trying to solve the issue at hand they are just pushing it off to somewhere else. I have heard of other places doing this and shipping them off to big cities by bus. I pray they receive the help they need.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/1/2016 9:07:00 AM
Out of sight out of mind.
Date: 11/30/2016 12:19:00 PM
It is a major problem and truly a situation that none are immune to, none. It has always existed and always will. I love that you choose to visit 'their' emotions in your write that hits me deeply. Some people would ew and ah over a dog more deeply and sincerely that they would another human. The dog they don't fear on some level. Well done ... CayCay
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/1/2016 9:08:00 AM
I wish humans in some cases were treated at least half as well as some people treat their animals. Thanks Cay Cay.
Date: 11/30/2016 11:18:00 AM
Richard....this makes my heart bleed. I can't even imagine what it must be like to live on the streets...what circumstances have brought these people to this end. Where is the empathy? Dear, thank you for highlighting this with your write. You worded it so so well. Bless you
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/1/2016 9:11:00 AM
Thanks and blessings back to you. I appreciate you being the first to comment. Hugs Rick.

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