Get Your Premium Membership

Stepping Out

As I scent something new my taste buds grow- a bud, swells as the chocolate plant flowers my nose

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/25/2009 12:19:00 PM
Why the "a" on line 4? Not line 5? Why the repetition of the word bud? not an evocative word to begin with? Last 3 lines charmingly silly. This is you? Light & Love Debbie PS I must have cheap chocolate it doesn't have much of a smell?
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs