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Stepping Onto Cloud Nine

Where ever you are darling love will always be smiling sweetly living inside warm Each heartbeat a mirror bell ringing deep reflections draw sparkling gold on your beauty diamond gem treasuring Walking the seven steps together the way of truth and love our friendship Destiny paints a path colored dream holding under a rainbow promise Magical strengths in our resistance falling under enchanting magic Spelling powerful feelings sing out soft chanting echoes silver whisper upon a cloud love you house the dream wrote in heavenly syllable count

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/13/2014 11:06:00 PM

Now this is style! Flows so well, one might even conclude you are Irish!!!!! A7 for Me

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/14/2014 3:10:00 AM

i am irish smiling arthur sending you an auld irish blessing heartfelt beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciated

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/14/2014 2:55:00 AM

ah peter your so kind thank you so much for the truly beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated dear pal

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/13/2014 10:21:00 PM

Your love poem is very beautiful and romantic my dear friend Liam I enjoyed reading it. A 7 for you! love and hugs! xxx D.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/14/2014 3:07:00 AM

dorian thank you for an amazing beautiful comment dear friend your always so sweet heartfelt appreciated bless yoi

Joseph May

Date: 11/13/2014 3:19:00 PM

Wonderful write Liam...The 2nd stanza was my favorite...

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/13/2014 3:21:00 PM

thank you joseph wonderful comment deeply appreciated thank you kindly

Tim Smith

Date: 11/13/2014 2:56:00 PM

With a beautiful heart such as yours she will be soon climbing into your arms...cheers

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/13/2014 3:02:00 PM

oh i do not know much about that tim wonderful heartfelt beautiful comment thank you kindly dear friend misted the eyes bless

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/13/2014 2:45:00 PM

- Oh, Liam what beautiful and sweet poem ... (like your new avatar :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/13/2014 2:51:00 PM

smiling anne lise i only took that the other day standing outside just thought a change of profile everyone will see me lol what am i like thank you deeply beautiful comment dear pal bless you

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/13/2014 12:34:00 PM

Very beautiful and enchanting Liam. Almost a musical touch.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/13/2014 1:02:00 PM

you're so sweet brenda thank you ever so kindly dear friend truly very beautiful comment bless you

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/13/2014 12:20:00 PM

wrote in heavemly syllable count indeed.Soft flowing verse Liam.May you go up those seven steps with the one who would love you sincierely.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/13/2014 12:48:00 PM

smiling charmaine i need wings first lol joking about, wonderful comment floating in the clouds ha ha bless you dear friend thank you deeply