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Steppin' Out

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I saw a pal of mine in town all dressed up to the nines, hours of preparation and the result was divine. Crop top, Denim miniskirt jet black killer heels, feet at forty-five degrees God knows how that must feel. Sashay past the building site wolf whistles and remarks, they all got no acknowledgement, reaction? Not a spark. Cool, aloof, just striding on the pace really unhurried I honestly do have to say that Colin- you've got me worried.

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/29/2015 2:52:00 PM

LOL...reminds me of the old Kinks song, Lola...just don't try kissing him! Hugs, Rhonda

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/30/2015 6:14:00 AM

Adam's apple- a dead giveaway. Viv x

Jan Allison

Date: 3/29/2015 7:03:00 AM

Simply hilarious Viv - a 7 from me :-) Hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/29/2015 1:08:00 PM

Thanks, Jan, you can't beat a bit of levity every now and then. Gotta go- this mankini's starting to chafe x

Constance La France

Date: 3/28/2015 1:28:00 PM

Viv, this was delightful, I was thinking who could walk on those heels!!!! a perfect 7 rating and thanks for visiting my poem, blossoms and bubbles . . .

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/28/2015 1:35:00 PM

Thanks, and the pleasure was all mine. A lovely piece. Viv x

Paul Callus

Date: 3/28/2015 11:13:00 AM

Very entertaining, Viv! Thanks for sharing! // paul

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/28/2015 1:13:00 PM

Thanks, Paul. Have a groovy weekend. Regards, Viv

Derek Harper

Date: 3/28/2015 9:39:00 AM

Viv, late getting back, apologies. Love this poem. reminds me of 'shaved her legs and he was a she....' by the great man. Are you in the UK?

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/28/2015 10:37:00 AM

Aye, lad. Derbyshire born and bred, me duck. Yes, you're right, a gentle nod to Lou Reed.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/27/2015 8:55:00 PM

G'day Viv... just imagining the look on your face when Colin made his presence is enough to giggle at let alone him stirring up the testosterone on a building site. Thanks for the laugh Viv - Lindsay

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/28/2015 3:22:00 AM

Ayup, Lindsay. Yes, it takes allsorts to make a world.