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I sat in the kitchen, Mum stood at the sink, the radio nattered away, when all of a sudden she stopped washing the pots, a Fleetwood Mac song started to play. It was 'Albatross', “ We used to both dance to this, a Slow Foxtrot, your Dad and me, come on, grab my hand, have a go, learn the steps it is easy to do, as you'll see ”. We stood face to face, hand in hand and began, as she walked through the steps like a pro, I tried to pick up both the rhythm and steps without crushing all of her toes. We moved round the floor in a figure of eight, by the end of the song not too bad, and with a smile on her face, both eyes closed, for a second, she danced Slow Foxtrot with my late Dad.

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Date: 8/1/2018 8:31:00 AM
Closing brought tears to my eyes my friend. Our mother lost our dad in 1969 and lived on 48 more years missing him. Now we 11 children are missing them both... A fav... a tender scene that reminds..
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Date: 7/31/2018 8:10:00 AM
I danced at the teenage disco to this with my first crush when only thirteen Viv. I have loved the tune ever since.
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Date: 7/30/2018 7:34:00 AM
What a lovely poem, Viv. Music has a way to bring up memories.
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Date: 7/31/2018 2:58:00 AM
Thanks Agnes, indeed it does. Viv x
Date: 7/30/2018 1:36:00 AM
Hello Viv … just a wonderful poem Viv. No need to write any more - thanks Viv - Longwarry
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Date: 7/31/2018 2:58:00 AM
Cheers, Lindsay, appreciate you stopping by. regards, Viv
Date: 7/29/2018 10:25:00 PM
Oh the sting of tender tears as I read your last line,Viv, and poignant reality set in. A captivating and moving piece that reached in and touched my heart and gave me reason to linger over your beautiful verses.. brilliant and emotional poetry. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/31/2018 2:59:00 AM
Thanks, Susan, very kind. Viv x
Date: 7/29/2018 4:42:00 PM
this was so beautiful, Viv. What a way to remember your dad and your mother remembering him(through you)
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Date: 7/31/2018 2:59:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea, funny the things that come back from distant memory when a song plays. Viv x
Date: 7/29/2018 7:02:00 AM
A dance of love and family..that ending is superb!
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Date: 7/31/2018 3:00:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay, for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Date: 7/29/2018 4:28:00 AM
aww what a tender poem Mr Viv, music can bring back so many memories. I wonder if my poem inspired you to write this lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/31/2018 3:00:00 AM
Pure coincidence, Jan, great minds etc... Viv x
Date: 7/29/2018 2:37:00 AM
A lovely moment indeed Viv, a song resurfaces the memories. Lovely song too. Tom
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Date: 7/31/2018 3:00:00 AM
Yes, a fine song. Timeless.Thanks, Tom . Regards, Viv

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