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Stench of Ash

I watch a procession of trucks, cars as the last vehicle passes and silence returns before evening is replaced with gray ash, when my breath feels the stench of litter from remnants of today's industry. It is the moment when poisoned air becomes thick , assaulting my vision, the mind, this very being... how the stink of commercialism grips time's unbecoming realization. As the light in winding tunnels disappear, my instinct takes over: a raw escape to inhale moon's pure fragrance... yet, a suffocating fear consumes me while I wrestle with next day, and the next, barely alive from toxic emission--a ghastly brew. For Stink Contest of Anthony Slausen 10/4/2016

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Date: 10/6/2016 11:31:00 AM
Timely piece with a message.....we have made our planet stinky with progress and pollution, Time to wake up! hearty congrats on the great win Nette:)// love, Anu:)
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Date: 10/5/2016 8:21:00 PM
The price of progress, Nette, and you've expressed it very well. Congrats on your fine podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/5/2016 1:32:00 PM
Hi nette: A dramatic poetic approach to the nature of man and industry. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/5/2016 8:07:00 AM
woooohh...deep Nette! I love it :) Congratulations on your placement! :)-luloo
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Date: 10/4/2016 4:25:00 PM
I really am jealous for our antenants...They definitely used walking or maybe a horse or a bicycle to travel..Polutiion was much less..along with illnesses due to fumes..and trees weremuch greener indeed..Excellent topic Nette.
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Date: 10/4/2016 1:23:00 PM
How thankless and selfish of us to treat nature this way. I felt your pulse through your magnificent poem!
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Date: 10/4/2016 12:35:00 PM
- A shame - we are born with an amazing brain, but use it poorly - A wonderful poem to this contest, Nette - good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/4/2016 10:06:00 AM
The price of prosperity is steep! To me this is a sad poem, beautifully written, nette. The entire globe suffers from the same illness.
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Date: 10/4/2016 8:24:00 AM
Very good, Nette, it just gets worse :'( good luck in the contest Hugs Eve
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