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Stay a Little Longer

Water trickles and steam lingers my heart's pounding beating rhythmically across my chest I drag my fingers slowly dreaming day-dreaming of you and our nights together so wet so steamy Come here and greet me enter my night enter my heart and stay The nights are long but our time is short Stay a little longer this time linger in my warmth and let me bask in your being water trickles steam rises my heart beats our hearts beat long into the night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/9/2015 11:32:00 PM
Forgot to say/give A7
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Date: 12/9/2015 11:31:00 PM
This just flows so well Tim, you sure have style my friend!
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Date: 12/9/2015 10:27:00 AM
From the heart to the computer and not a beat in between. A great romantic piece.
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Date: 12/9/2015 5:23:00 AM
- For always - A lovely poem, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/8/2015 8:12:00 PM
"Stay a little longer this time-linger in my warmth-and let me bask in your being"...Love this passionate verse, Tim! I like how it begins and ends with the water gently trickling... Always, Laura
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Date: 12/8/2015 5:55:00 PM
You are a true romantic my friend.
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Date: 12/8/2015 5:30:00 PM
Very nice, as always Tim, like your style.
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Date: 12/8/2015 3:38:00 PM
After that romantic write she should stay all night, Tim.. Very lovely.
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/8/2015 3:40:00 PM
Thank you Lin
Date: 12/8/2015 3:18:00 PM
Sensual in a beautiful way..Lovely!
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/8/2015 3:21:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine

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