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silk covering falls your body pure innocence a tainting notion.... draw close in secret, arousing palpitation.... infinite rapture.... the morning sun rise.... passion still exists with hope will you stay again....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/24/2011 10:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:09:00 AM
Many Congrats ^Rick for big win in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 2/17/2011 11:47:00 PM
Beautiful Senryu, Rick. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 2/17/2011 4:50:00 PM
congratulations Rick
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Date: 2/17/2011 2:05:00 PM
One of the most elegantly strung together that I am seeing. Congratulations, rick.
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Date: 2/17/2011 11:32:00 AM
Wonderful Senryu! I liked the title very much.Congrats on your win ^Rick--kashinath
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Date: 2/17/2011 9:54:00 AM
Hello Rick, Congratulations on your win in the contest Well Done As Always, Shar
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Date: 2/17/2011 9:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine 5th Place win in the contest, Rick! Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/16/2011 9:02:00 PM
oh , how you speak of passipn, rick!! big CHEERS for the win! :) huggs,nette
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Date: 2/16/2011 8:10:00 PM
enticing and lovely. Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 2/16/2011 7:35:00 PM
These are three nicely descriptive senryu entries. Congratulations on winning in Linda's contest with them.
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Date: 2/16/2011 7:17:00 PM
Rick Rick a big congratulations on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/16/2011 5:57:00 PM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Linda, Rick
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Date: 2/16/2011 5:37:00 PM
Congrats Rick on your success in my contest luv.. thankxx for your constant support ...always...
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Date: 2/15/2011 6:30:00 PM
really enjoyed this one ~mls
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