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State of the Disunion

--- merely bourgeois so-called collective Western world: time for another election, "fair and free"? From the way things look, one would almost think that an exorcism would be more helpful ...

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/10/2024 9:30:00 AM

Hello, Gary, I chuckled and then wanted to cry. Your poem starkly illuminates disillusionment with the political landscape, questioning the integrity of democracy in a world clouded by bias and inequality. Your words are filled with a call for radical change, challenging the status quo with unflinching honesty. Amen! - Blessings, Daniel

Gary Onderisin
Date: 5/10/2024 10:47:00 AM

thanks for your kind words, daniel. i very much appreciate your taking the time to comment; it does my heart good to know that you liked the poem. my very best wishes to you, gary