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State of Depression

Conflicted and smothered by lies She and others have told Ugliness bleeds out of the pores Of her meaningless soul Instead of looking at something authentive She only sees a monster who feasts upon fears She's shamed by her true reflection Each time she gazes upon the mirror She's been hiding inside her costume Made of human flesh Built by four walls of emptiness -Too strong to be broken, yet too delicate to even exist Now, as she's sinking into a state of depression, She tries to fight and just hold on But she's worried she's been living in her flesh For far too long Still, her whispers linger In the winds of the chilling air That maybe -just maybe, Someday, someone might actually WANT to care!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/5/2016 9:06:00 PM
Laura, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 4/17/2016 8:21:00 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Laura. :)
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Date: 4/11/2016 10:59:00 AM
Very brilliant first post. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead............hugs.
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Laura Giles
Date: 4/11/2016 11:07:00 AM
Thanx so much!!! Wish you the same!!! :)
Date: 4/11/2016 6:38:00 AM
Laura, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Laura Giles
Date: 4/11/2016 11:08:00 AM
Thanx so much!!! Really means a lot!!!

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