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The bird sheds the feathers, of Autumn's pain Welcoming winter, with open wings Scents change, with the new breeze

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Date: 3/31/2024 8:37:00 PM
Another superb write, Arastu. Your image of the bird shedding feathers of seasonal pain is truly inspired. Remember, though, that commas compel your reader to pause. Your creative lines invite a free flow without pauses. Best wishes, Brian
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Arastu Goyal
Date: 4/9/2024 9:01:00 PM
Thank you for the wonderful feedback, I will look into this
Date: 11/1/2023 8:48:00 AM
This poem has the impeccable aura of rejuvenation and transformation, so gorgeously you've conveyed the essence of new beginning with beautiful imageries of the bird!
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Arastu Goyal
Date: 11/1/2023 6:20:00 PM
Thanks!

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