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Start To Fawn

There once was a man right at dawn That took a long whiz on the lawn Hairy whizzed on the top Didn't know when he'd stop Hard to tell who would start to fawn
Just trying to get Hairy to go outside for his business>>>>LOL

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/21/2015 3:47:00 PM
LOL, I can picture this
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Date: 11/20/2015 7:40:00 PM
haha, just seeing your reply to me. I was thinking Hairy was the name of the man!! Guess i did not pay attention to the footnote. oh my!
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Date: 11/6/2015 3:28:00 PM
Sara, I really liked this. the meter was perfect until last line. I think if you did a super funny last line, this would be your best limerick ever!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/6/2015 4:28:00 PM
Start to fawn means being subservant to...Was the dog going to win or was the man???Sara...It is a man thing..They will understand..

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