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Stars In Your Eyes

heaven's ancient lights dispatched billions of years past glisten in your eyes *Light travels at the speed of 186,000 miles per second When we look up to the stars, we view light sent eons ago

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/5/2016 9:09:00 AM
A very lovely senryu :)
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Date: 8/4/2015 8:45:00 AM
Just saw Ruben's comment. SO funny
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Date: 8/3/2015 11:16:00 PM
A lovely poem here! The stars are just remarkable. "heaven's ancient lights" indeed. It's always a pleasure reading your work. Always, Laura
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Date: 8/1/2015 3:57:00 PM
Ahh........you are indeed, a renaissance man.......romantic at heart !! Love it!
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Date: 7/28/2015 2:04:00 PM
Hello Tim!! A brilliant and fantastic Senryu write!! It's nice to know that we are already dated by quite a while when we look up at the Stars. A "7" for sure!! Cheers, Gary
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Date: 7/27/2015 11:39:00 AM
This is a beauty Tim ;) I love it! Hope you are having a good start to your week ;)
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Date: 7/24/2015 12:34:00 PM
Amazing fact and a brilliant senryu, Tim! :-)
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Date: 7/21/2015 9:15:00 PM
aww, that is pretty overwhelming and beautiful to think about! :)
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Date: 7/21/2015 7:47:00 PM
oh wow, I love this one, Tim. Hey, I saw the nice thing you said in a blog about me. Thanks so much, my friend.
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