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Stars Are Winks From Heaven

A million lights shone down tonight And took my breath away A crane In flight Was highlighted against the fading sky I tried to count the souls in heaven I miss you but I know you're safe in heaven my tears are like the night dew, but only fall for you . I wonder why , I can not lie At gods mystic ways set free You'll see The wonders of creation You can watch blessed angels in full flight and stand in awe at heavens delight cherubs trumpets play and angels sing As death delivered you to heaven time will soon rejoin our souls to sing duets in heaven comp entry 06042016 sorry if not right got carried away

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Date: 7/15/2016 11:34:00 AM
Stephen, a wonderful poem here, I am grateful to have read it...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 7/15/2016 12:11:00 PM
many thanks for reading it and running the comp , stephen
Date: 4/6/2016 7:43:00 PM
Stephen, the title of your poem is delightful. Vivid use of personification. I enjoyed reading it. ~ Sonia
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Date: 4/7/2016 1:58:00 AM
thank you for stopping by and reading my poem , chuffed you like it :-)
Date: 4/6/2016 7:17:00 AM
Well expression. Nicely penned.
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 4/6/2016 7:45:00 AM
thanks for reading my poem and your remarks cheers stephen

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