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Starry Starry Night

Starry Starry Night It was a crystal clear night when one By nocturnal watch lies gazing into the darkness The eternal endless expanse brought to life by stellar light. Stars so close that one could capture its brilliance Reaching, grasping, touching Hands extended to keep one forever. Through this glorious sea of galactic beauty The gazer finds what he is searching for, The collimation of sight aligning his future One distant, tiny twinkle, An apparition eclipsed by others, Falls through the night into his universe. He closes his eyes and makes a wish.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/12/2013 12:32:00 PM
beautiful write Debbie....welcome to th soup
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Debbie Martinez
Date: 9/29/2013 9:51:00 PM
Thank you so much for your positive feedback
Date: 9/3/2013 3:04:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Debbie ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/3/2013 2:30:00 AM
This was lovely to read Debbie. A warm welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 9/2/2013 10:41:00 PM
the perfect imagery Debbie, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *
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Date: 9/2/2013 5:15:00 PM
I love the starry starry view Debbie, nice ending.., thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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