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Starry Nights

Defiled by the city lights, the stars no longer shine so bright. I can't try to count their numbers, or wish upon their falling beauty. Life is dulled deep in the night by the bustling busyness, the need to succeed, to forget about the splendor, that we can no longer see. Nature is destroyed as industry progresses day by day, and every night I'm mourning, because the stars have faded away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/20/2009 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 9/19/2009 2:18:00 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 9/15/2009 7:32:00 PM
Betty - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 9/15/2009 1:30:00 AM
Betty, congrats on having your work featured...Raul
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Date: 9/14/2009 9:06:00 AM
I love the sentiment in this featured poem. Congratulations on your work being featured. Sara
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Date: 9/14/2009 8:42:00 AM
This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem; your poem speaks for itself. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 5/3/2009 9:28:00 PM
Betty, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/28/2009 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals Betty. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/5/2009 1:58:00 AM
well & nice....lovely. Congrates!! Bassam.
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Date: 11/12/2008 2:26:00 PM
So much truth shared in your words. It's sad. Thankfully, in North Dakota, we can still see the stars and open spaces. Nice use of alliterations in your poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 10/2/2008 1:12:00 AM
Betty this is wonderful pollution and mans regard for the enviorement is sad to say the least. I hope its not too late in correcting it. There seems to be more concern now global warming , etc. I dont no if we will get it back to the way it was , I want YOu and your children and your chidrens children to see the stars. God bless ...Michael
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Date: 9/30/2008 5:25:00 PM
Betty I feel just what you feel everyones in a hurry no time to stop and see the beauty of nature around us! I am a tree hugger of the sorts so I love what you wrote! Wonderfully done! Laura :)
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