Starlit Sky

starlit sky--- we play cross-zero over it

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/27/2012 5:32:00 AM

intriguing lines Kash.. cross zero? sounds unique luv.. very imaginative work.. my friend..luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2012 4:34:00 PM

HI, kash! I have a tutoring job in half an hour or so and am just killing time at the school before I go over there! Have a lovely day!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 7/17/2012 5:20:00 PM

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 7/17/2012 5:01:00 PM

Nice rearrangement of the typical haiku...I have never heard of cross zero, Kashi...but I do get a sense it is similar to my childhood game of Tick Tac Toe...Thanks for visiting my poems and your friendship...Hope all is well at your camp...Can u believe it is back up to 100 degrees F today? Give us a break, sun! Gwendolena (nice new nickname for me,,,,fun!)

Jack Horne

Date: 7/13/2012 2:04:00 PM

lovely interesting haiku, Kash

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/13/2012 12:28:00 PM

come on, kashi... i want more!..:) hugggs to you on a rainy day!

Lisa Cooper

Date: 7/13/2012 7:38:00 AM

love the way your poetry always makes the reader think..! great imagery!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/13/2012 5:25:00 AM

Kash....cool movement! jimbo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/13/2012 1:08:00 AM

HI, Kash, I won't be here much this weekend. Hopefully I'll find time tomorrow but not after that! See ya later, Alligator.

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/12/2012 12:20:00 PM

Awesome write Kash.. I always enjoy your haiku.. Thank you for the heads up on the spelling error.. ;-)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/12/2012 9:44:00 AM

okay, send me the money for a new computer!... enjoyed this 'ku more on further readings, kashi bud!..:) huggs!

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/11/2012 7:42:00 PM

I can't help but smile with the simplicity and delight this poem brings!

David Williams

Date: 7/11/2012 3:48:00 PM

Kash, very visual, I can see you doing it...David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/11/2012 11:57:00 AM

It was such a pleasure to read your poetry today Kash. I hope to be able in the next few weeks to find the time and energy to read and comment. May you walk through the inspirational garden that you may continue to write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/11/2012 11:53:00 AM

darn swell, kashi bud!.... missed you; my computer conked out.. hoa re you!.. give me more and come visit!.:) huggs!

Nancy Jones

Date: 7/10/2012 8:13:00 PM

You make me laugh. You make me cry. Or maybe I make my own self do that stuff. Ya know what I mean? (the question mark is superfluous) Thanks, Namaste, ~N

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2012 8:04:00 PM

I like the looks of this. I wonder if cross-zero is another word for our Tic Tac Toe!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/10/2012 3:10:00 PM

This is a fabulous write my friend! I'm always intrigued with these Haikus! Great Work!!