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winds whirling clouds about within the confines of this mind stirred emotions in motion stagnant waters notwithstanding spinning all perspectives askew after the pub crawl where will we land if not by the sea practicing our butterfly stroke under a monarch moon Submittted on March 28, 2023 for contest A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE NO.1204 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND AP: 2nd place, HM

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Date: 3/28/2023 1:52:00 PM
Congratulations..."winds whirling clouds about with in" love your alliteration and gift of imagery here, "butterfly strokes under a monarch moon"
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/30/2023 11:50:00 AM
Thank you very much, Nancy. Most appreciated ~

Book: Shattered Sighs