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Starless Night

hope misplaced, dark day dawns tick-tock, tick-tock date confirmed by lot thirteenth day of twelfth month revenge builds its own gallows three-day night of anguished fasting queen's hope rests upon her monarch's orb Jews' annihilation - signed but not sealed
written July 22, 2016 for Kim Merryman's Etheree contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/28/2016 4:26:00 AM
Congrats Reason, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 7/27/2016 6:21:00 PM
Reason, congrats on your 2nd place win this unique etheree! I recognized the story of Esther right away. What a clever way to tell the story! Thank you for supporting my contest! Blessings!
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Date: 7/27/2016 10:45:00 PM
Thanks Kim glad you enjoyed it
Date: 7/27/2016 2:54:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Reason:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/27/2016 1:01:00 AM
Congratulations on this poignant ethere winning a well deserved second place Reason. Outstanding! 7 ; )
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Date: 7/27/2016 12:00:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this interesting theme for your Etheree, Regards Sunita.
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Date: 7/26/2016 11:55:00 PM
A fine etheree, Reason, congratulations! Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/26/2016 10:37:00 PM
A moving write, Reason. Congratulations on your Second Place win in the Etheree Premiere Contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/26/2016 10:34:00 PM
I love this! Great feel of time, like a anxious heartbeat! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/26/2016 9:29:00 PM
Hi Reason A., Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved: -)Alexis
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Date: 7/26/2016 8:56:00 PM
Reason A. Poteet, congrats on your awesome placement, it is well deserved. Very moving etheree you have written...:)-luloo
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