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Staring

Staring at the lake and the years he's lost so far. Old man.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/6/2015 7:54:00 AM
A good poem. Julia, :)
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Date: 12/22/2014 5:49:00 AM
Good one..It could be a senryu as well..I enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
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Date: 10/31/2014 7:39:00 PM
Ah, how sad and moving....and the years he's lost so far...how sad!
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Date: 11/1/2014 12:52:00 PM
Thank you Suzanne. I'll 'visit' your poems, when I'll be able to, possibly tomorrow!
Date: 10/15/2014 11:33:00 PM
Shining this star dear vas sills.
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