Get Your Premium Membership

Stardust's Dream

Rock gently oh sweet precious child Hug your Teddy, the night aglow With my lullaby’s hum beguiled; “Twinkle, Twinkle Little Star”, flow! Mommy‘s near as the skies blaze deep Everything’s right, let out that grin Till eyelids drop through folded sleep; In wonderland, a trance begins. When pixies lift their wings of gold Revealing a magical place; Watch ribbons of petals unfold Then on the lea, the fireflies race. Glitters blow on doves, on lakes green Beyond chuckles, elfin will play As stardust whiffs a blessed dream Twinkle, child, through heaven’s array! Twinkle, Twinkle Little Star Contest Sponsor: Kelly Deschler 4/28/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/11/2015 3:29:00 PM
Wonderful poem congratulations on your wonderful win a 7 :~) hugs <3
Login to Reply
Date: 5/9/2015 8:02:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations In Kelly's "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star" contest. ~LINDA~
Login to Reply
Date: 5/9/2015 6:42:00 PM
Nette, Congrats on your Twinkle Little Star win. SKAT LOVE
Login to Reply
Date: 5/9/2015 1:10:00 PM
I truly enjoyed this beautiful, tender write. The imagery is pure magic! Congrats on a win, Nette!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/6/2015 11:16:00 PM
A gem my friend. Love the flow, imagery and creativity in this one. A7 and bravoooooo!!!!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/29/2015 1:52:00 PM
Very well penned, the words seemed to draw you along like a lullaby current cruising through a dream. Emile.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/28/2015 8:21:00 PM
The bond of mother and child is enchantment itself, only the mother has felt the first heartbeat, for they are one..good luck in the contest
Login to Reply
Date: 4/28/2015 6:43:00 PM
delightful delightful write Nette simply charming imagery:-) Hugs Jan xx good luck in the contest xx 7 xx
Login to Reply
Date: 4/28/2015 3:23:00 PM
A babe's night sleep sweetened with your flavored words and fanciful expressions. Excellent poem as I take my snooze time!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/28/2015 5:17:00 AM
If I read a poem and did not know who the author was, I would KNOW it was you...I believe it's called 'signature style' and your signature is unmistakable in this elegant and dreamy write. And the winner is...
Login to Reply
Date: 4/28/2015 3:23:00 AM
- A beautiful good night "song" Nette - The text is perfect :) - I wish you best of luck in contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 4/28/2015 2:47:00 AM
Dreamy, dreamy poem. Every line flowed impeccably well with soft imagery,reminding me of my childhood lullabies, Nette.
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things