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Stardust Swirling

Swirling, spiraling universe Stardust in galaxy submerse Coat me in refined stardust Brightest star afar entrust Contended with His Divine Love In Seventh Heaven above Swirling, spiraling universe Stardust in galaxy submerse Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Contest: Stardust In An Octella Written this Wednesday, July 10, 2013 Poet: Sara Kendrick

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/13/2013 2:54:00 PM

Very nice poem, Sara. Very expressive imagery! Well done! I felt like I was inside of a dream world as I was reading this. By the way, thank you for commenting on my poem "Heaven For A Poet". And, I am glad that you enjoy my work!

Anne Rutherford

Date: 7/30/2013 6:06:00 AM

Delightful poem Sara, I'm so glad it won. xxoo Anne

Skat A

Date: 7/18/2013 10:22:00 PM

Hi Sara, I love your star dust winning poem. Congratulations! Luv* SKAT

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/16/2013 3:53:00 AM

twirling with grace, sara.. congrats on your win in my contest... do check my blog!..:) huggs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/15/2013 9:27:00 PM

I like the way you layed out your poem, intresting to look at and read. Congratulations.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/15/2013 7:13:00 PM

hi Sara great poem congrats shadow x smiles

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/13/2013 9:11:00 AM

Very nicely penned about the stardust. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/12/2013 11:59:00 AM

This is very nice Sara ,,,, I hope you win with it ;}

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/10/2013 7:09:00 PM

You have written a fabulous entry into Nette's contest! I love the way you put the poem together, a very nice way to put Him into this subject, I really enjoyed reading it this evening! What a glorious piece, such a lovely poem, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/10/2013 12:38:00 PM

- Beautiful contest poem, Sara ! - Nette will love it! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)