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Stardust

Stardust flickers, falls The tip of the iceberg Warm current melts conscience

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/15/2015 9:15:00 AM
Excellent haiku with awesome imagery! Well done with a 7! Pandita
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Date: 8/14/2015 8:57:00 AM
very clever haiku - love the imagery:-) hugs Jan xx
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Uwe Stroh
Date: 8/14/2015 8:59:00 AM
thanks Jan

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