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Stardust

For the star I argue was in my hand; above blinking— the reflection of me, of her in my head; powder of madness I'm sending back— for clean sheets and their shift.

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Date: 9/13/2023 5:04:00 AM
Interesting imagery, Paige!
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Date: 9/12/2023 9:54:00 PM
I love this form tetractys. Your poem flows very well. And i love the line especially “ powder of madness” thats unique. And your opening is intriguing. Very well expressed.
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Date: 9/12/2023 3:54:00 PM
enjyed your. poem, made me think of a poker game, don't know why, very interesting reading yann
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