Stardust

Like diamonds into jet inlaid, Ethereal fireworks displays, Skyrockets, shooting stars, cascade, With crystal fountains, rainbow rays. Ethereal fireworks displays. Florescent flames that interlace. With crystal fountains, rainbow rays, Which sparkle in night-times embrace. Florescent flames that interlace. Skyrockets, shooting stars, cascade, Which sparkle in night-times embrace, Like diamonds into jet inlaid. Sponsor Eve Roper. 1 / 24 / 2021.

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Eve Roper

Date: 2/5/2021 11:58:00 PM

Thank you for participating and winning in the Pantoum contest with this wonderful poem. Your poem had great imagery, feeling, and flow, George. Hugs Eve

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/4/2021 2:04:00 PM

So much on display! Congratulations, George!

Wendy Watson

Date: 1/27/2021 3:17:00 AM

I absolutely love the images you have eloquently described here, George - so many sparkling gems from start to finish! I would be very surprised if this isn't placed - brilliant! ( Just noticed that one line reads 'skyrocket' and one 'skyrockets' should you wish to change it)

Wendy Watson
Date: 1/27/2021 1:57:00 PM

I'm glad to have been of encouragement, George and thanks for increasing my vocabulary (I'd never heard the word 'fillip' before!)

George Seal
Date: 1/27/2021 9:23:00 AM

Thankyou Wendy for being observant, and alerting me of my mistake. I have now corrected the word in question. Also with your wonderful review of my poem, it gave me a fillip during these dreary days. Please accept my best regards. George.