Starburst

above the trees and distant black mountains each night the all of creation starburst! Dave Austin

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Joe Maverick

Date: 7/30/2017 4:33:00 PM

Hello there Daver, Its a really punchy write that does burst out on my sight hope all's well.'

Raven Howell

Date: 7/20/2016 11:02:00 PM

This is my favorite of yours! Just hits the mark. "Starburst"!

Daver Austin
Date: 7/22/2016 12:23:00 PM

Thanks for the visit. daver

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/15/2016 8:29:00 PM

I left the Smokey jazz bar and found my way home! Love this Tanka, Daver.:) I can't get into my email; my computer, for now, is a place for pantomimes, charades, and senseless circus frolicking. I will get it repaired once more, (4th time). Everything has been corrupted. Still, I am happy! Keep well, will write to you soon. Love, Mikki