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Starbucks Patty

I know a girl named Patty though I never learned her last name, I should have asked her long ago so I only have myself to blame. I can’t ask her what it is now; we’ve known each other for so long, I’m afraid that it might get weird or that she would take it wrong. She makes my coffee every morning and brings it without trial, I pay her and throw in a little tip and she thanks me with a smile. I ask her about the classes she takes and she asks me about my job, She told me that her boyfriend’s name was Steve or maybe it was Rob. And Steve or Rob had a plan for advancement but in a different town, He must have gone without her because lately she’s been a little down. I’m not worried about her though I’m sure that someone will snap her up, Because she seems to be a very nice girl and she brews a pretty good cup. She’s just one of the people in my life and I hope that she will stay, She knows the drink I always get and tells me to have a nice day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/20/2011 12:41:00 AM
I walked into Starbucks the other morning after a long night at work..I asked all the employees brewing coffee who looked sorta draggy "who is the happiest to be here today" . Only one employee said, "ME! I AM HAPPY TO BE HERE TODAY!" She got my 20 dollar tip. The others, well.....they are trying to smile more. I found my Star Bucks Patty too! Such a nice write on everyday life. The best kind are written just about a moment---like this. Gwendolen
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Date: 9/17/2011 5:50:00 PM
clever and entertaining. i guess we all have someone like "starbucks patty" in our lives - it's nice to acknowledge that person in rhyme. i enjoyed this!
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Date: 9/17/2011 3:06:00 PM
a sweet tart of a poesy, tony... love this! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 9/17/2011 11:28:00 AM
Love this one, Tony...great reminder of how full of blessings life can be ifya let it.. Namaste~N
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Date: 9/17/2011 10:42:00 AM
Ha! Cute. :)
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