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STARBUCKS AND COOKIE I sit in Barnes and Noble Looking at the figure-display over the snack bar Oh how out-of-place in time they look Twain Shaw Hardy Dickinson Hemingway Have read them all Out of time The artist has caught them from middle-to-old age Twain the Mississippi observer older than the river that flame-gray hair nose-slipping specs cigar Shaw the same snowy mass but older than creation he contemplates the infinite Hardy stirs a cup of tea has just exclaimed “Wha! Pshaw! Jude isn’t as sad as that.” Emily? Emily sits for an artist she has a sweater tied round her neck- those drooping slender shoulders always protected but from what no one knows Hemingway what’s to say? he be da man smokes his pipe thinking about the slaughter of ‘brave bulls’ “Good fight!” says Ernie assigning some sort of ludicrous intelligence There are several more But I’ll leave them in their mothballs The question arises at least in my mind arises Given their various outlook would they earn a high place in today’s world? I doubt it None of them play guitar or saxophone The drummer they moved to had an unbelievable subtleness I imagine they could get through a work without need for a dripping drooling bedroom scene And then why watch anyone use the lavatory? They obviously didn’t know how to burn film didn’t need to burn time Call it imagination Call it intelligence Call it sanity!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/11/2010 5:40:00 PM
Yes, so true what you say about how they might do in today's "market." A great commentary on those great creaters! LUv Andrea
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Date: 7/10/2010 9:19:00 AM
The longer the world stands, the more complexity is added, and the more obscure moral value becomes. Thank Love, there are still a few of moral concience, such as yourself, Daver. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/9/2010 9:37:00 PM
Smile ~ This is beautiful and amazing Dav -- Your layout, the flow, the images, the serenity of it all as it seemed, so gently spoken -- like a dream brother; spectacular!!! One of Your very best which I have read I believe...."Much Warmth & Love to You & Yours Always," John! ~ Smile, keep shining brother, bye!:) ~
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Date: 7/9/2010 5:33:00 PM
Perfection Daver.. so enjoyed a very creative write from u with all the famous personages.. and so eloquently described by your excellent words.. enjoyed.. with luv..
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Date: 7/9/2010 4:03:00 PM
I call it brilliant Daver, trully enjoyed another one of your narrative poems. Honestly how do you get from Barnes and nobles to Sarbucks.I love both places. Love it , and enjoyed.LeeAnn
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Date: 7/9/2010 3:06:00 PM
Good Morning Dave :)!! This is such a joy to read! And I have to say, I like your writing style as well-- a touch of humor but you also give deep meaning to it-- this poem of yours-- you definitely posted a good question--where indeed would they place today?? I'd like to believe that at least some of them would be way up there-- our readers today would surely benefit from it-- very nice write! Haha now let me head on over to Starbucks now ;) -- nikko :)
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Date: 7/9/2010 2:55:00 PM
Awesome, Daver! A new fave for me. Not a Hemingway fan, but love Dickinson and feel like her thoughts are still contemporary in today's world. But would they achieve fame? Success? We'll never know. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/9/2010 2:47:00 PM
Oh wow....I love this!! You have taken me along to sit and sip coffee in such amazing company, that I don't want to leave!! What would they think, I wonder, to see their genius displayed on the shelves...next to a cup of coffee that costs five bucks!!! ...while the rest of us take for granted the wonder of their magnificent words! What a wonderful poem! :)
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