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Star Wishes

In God's great and vast universe Comes the meteor showers of Perseid Mythical hero who takes the stars for a ride As to Earth they hurl to collide Celestial diamonds zooming by across the vast ethereal sky The heavenly fireworks were an awesome sight As people watched with great delight Making wishes as they fall Hoping they come true that's all And if they did, of course you knew Upon a star your wish came true

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/22/2012 6:24:00 AM
Congrats David!
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Date: 8/21/2012 3:33:00 PM
Great poem telling some of the myth about Perseid..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 8/21/2012 11:28:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win Joseph xx
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Date: 8/21/2012 5:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tirzah's "Shooting Stars" contest Joseph. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/21/2012 3:32:00 AM
Joseph big congrats on your win...David
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Date: 8/21/2012 12:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win,Joseph..Great job....
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Date: 8/20/2012 1:59:00 PM
Wonderful write! Congrats on your 5th place finish in my contest!~Tirzah~
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Joseph May
Date: 8/20/2012 2:41:00 PM
thank you so much Tirzah,,,glad i was able to place in your contest
Date: 8/17/2012 9:54:00 AM
I felt the need to stop by your list of poetry today Joseph. I wish to thank you for your kind words on my writing. Hope you have a wonderful weekend and hope to see you back here Monday. Love, Carol XX
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Joseph May
Date: 8/17/2012 1:32:00 PM
thank you Caro...l have a lovely weekend
Date: 8/15/2012 3:19:00 PM
Well written and uplifting poem, Joseph! Enjoyed very much - Tim
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Date: 8/14/2012 9:06:00 AM
may all your wishes come true, Joseph, i know mine will now i've read this wonderful poem.
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Date: 8/12/2012 1:33:00 PM
Joseph I like this one very much...David
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Joseph May
Date: 8/13/2012 10:51:00 AM
thank you David

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