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Star Vacation

From down here to a place afar Let's travel to a sparkling star, Hop on a UFO and dump our car To romp and rollick on the star. In the realm of galaxies and black holes Let's playact some stellar roles, You be an angel and I the sly devil And forge another world on an anvil. We will wander around the milky ways And explore the by lanes and highways, And survey the handiwork of God - Is it a masterpiece or just slipshod? On our way back home astride A shooting star or a cruising asteroid, Let's wash up and dress our best On the moon to wine, dine and fete!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/1/2013 2:50:00 PM
Wonderful!
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Date: 1/28/2013 11:59:00 PM
this is a masterpiece...great write...
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Date: 1/26/2013 5:02:00 PM
Hi Abdul, :-) Congrats in Mystic's "FANTASY FANTASY FANTASY" fun contest... God Bless*LINDA
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Date: 1/27/2013 4:23:00 PM
Thanks Linda.
Date: 1/26/2013 11:09:00 AM
Wonderful and nice piece,Abdul...Congrats on your win....
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Date: 1/24/2013 2:50:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/24/2013 12:49:00 PM
Abdul congrats on your win. Very imaginative. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 1/24/2013 12:00:00 PM
Lovely trip... among the stars. Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 1/24/2013 10:47:00 AM
Can just imagine riding on a shooting star through the galaxy !! Congrats on your win !!
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Date: 1/24/2013 9:53:00 AM
Awesome!! I really loved reading this one. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/20/2013 8:05:00 AM
Hello Abdul, I am looking for your response to Poetry. Let me know when it is done. I look forward to reading.
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Date: 1/19/2013 7:50:00 AM
Sounds like fun!
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Date: 1/18/2013 10:40:00 PM
this is a cute poem. If it is not for fantasy entry, it should be!!
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