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Star Vacation

From down here to a place afar
Let's travel to a sparkling star,
Hop on a UFO and dump our car
To romp and rollick on the star.

In the realm of galaxies and black holes
Let's playact some stellar roles,
You be an angel and I the sly devil
And forge another world on an anvil.

We will wander around the milky ways
And explore the by lanes and highways,
And survey the handiwork of God -
Is it a masterpiece or just slipshod?

On our way back home astride
A shooting star or a cruising asteroid,
Let's wash up and dress our best
On the moon to wine, dine and fete!

Copyright © Abdul Malik

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  1. Date: 2/1/2013 2:50:00 PM

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 11:59:00 PM
    this is a masterpiece...great write...

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 5:02:00 PM
    Hi Abdul, :-) Congrats in Mystic's "FANTASY FANTASY FANTASY" fun contest... God Bless*LINDA

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    Date: 1/27/2013 4:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Linda.
  1. Date: 1/26/2013 11:09:00 AM
    Wonderful and nice piece,Abdul...Congrats on your win....

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 2:50:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 12:49:00 PM
    Abdul congrats on your win. Very imaginative. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 12:00:00 PM
    Lovely trip... among the stars. Congratulations on the win.

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 10:47:00 AM
    Can just imagine riding on a shooting star through the galaxy !! Congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 9:53:00 AM
    Awesome!! I really loved reading this one. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 8:05:00 AM
    Hello Abdul, I am looking for your response to Poetry. Let me know when it is done. I look forward to reading.

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 7:50:00 AM
    Sounds like fun!

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 10:40:00 PM
    this is a cute poem. If it is not for fantasy entry, it should be!!