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Star Spangled

Here I am darling at the center of my everything, gazing over a lake looking upon silver stars lovingly dancing inside ripples. Sparkling in a moving mass kisses gently , touching deep waters, blinking diamond thoughts upon a moon face, reflections flooding through the mind every last one shines sweetly on you my love. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/24/2014 11:54:00 AM
I clicked on your poem thinking I was going to read a patriotic poem - my country's national anthem is called Star Spangled Banner. I love the diamond thoughts part... for that's what I really of them as. Thoughts are priceless :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/24/2014 12:28:00 PM
smiling timothy wonderful comment bless you
Date: 8/27/2014 9:52:00 PM
somebody's getting some love action for writing this piece!!!!:)
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Date: 8/11/2014 2:39:00 AM
- Soft and loving words to your loved ones - Beautiful poem, Liam - Wishing you a lovely Monday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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