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Star Song

Silent stars speak through rays of light Listen to them every night Perched up in heaven out they stare Life may well exist everywhere Silent statues who pray from dark naves Oceans lapping warm gentle waves Search beyond our old ancient sky What you will find may make you cry Nature's silence lives deep down in From this it's how time did begin Only we can sense what can be It's always there but not to see Silent stars shine silver on me Hear how these things might truly be Grasp the day's light and the night gloom Silent stars sing their songs in tune 104 words couplets Line 3

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Date: 5/5/2024 5:51:00 AM
Nicely done Greg, Congrats on your win
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Greg Gaul
Date: 5/6/2024 2:40:00 PM
Your kind comment is most supporting.
Date: 5/4/2024 12:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I really enjoyed reading your wonderful "Star Song" write. Great Ending... Have a blessed weekend.............
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Greg Gaul
Date: 5/4/2024 1:06:00 PM
Lotsa skillful imagery in your Tangerine Sunsets Paula. Thanks for your kind visit and commentary.
Date: 4/28/2024 4:57:00 PM
Beautiful poem Greg, though not surreal, it's a worthy read on any level
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Greg Gaul
Date: 5/4/2024 1:04:00 PM
Many thanks Tom.

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