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Star Shining In the Setting Sun

The sun was setting Casting red upon rippling clouds Rippling like the sand The sand upon the shore When the tide is out There it was a phenomenon A star shining before the sun set It was shining a radiant green Up there in the Western sky Right next to the setting red sun One more moment of awe One more reason to believe Only a divine creator Could do all these wonderful Acts of nature for man to see

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/29/2010 2:14:00 AM
i enjoyed this peace thank you duncan
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Date: 10/1/2010 1:27:00 PM
the word must have gotten out that my yard sale was lame... no customers today at all. guess to the good will I will go!
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Date: 9/28/2010 9:40:00 PM
i enjoyed this, really had me imagining the view... in which case i must agree with the final lines! i like your writing style as well
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Date: 9/28/2010 4:14:00 PM
the star that shines next to the moon? it sure is a phenomenon.(: ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 9/25/2010 5:24:00 PM
Truth be told in your last verse for sure Sara... amazing view from the human eye to behold from the Creator of all.. enjoyed my friend with luv...
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Date: 9/25/2010 3:02:00 PM
very nice enjoyed this have a great weekend and thanks for your help and support faleshia
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Date: 9/25/2010 6:56:00 AM
Bravo ! Great dedication to our Father in Heaven dear poet ! *smiles* james
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Date: 9/25/2010 6:40:00 AM
Very nice thoughts on a divine creator and faith
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Date: 9/25/2010 5:24:00 AM
When I look up and see these colors in the pink and violet clouds at sunset, I feel drawn closer to our Lord, Sara. Indeed, the is the Master's canvas and we are blessed with this colorful array many days. You find great inspiration from nature in your poetry, my friend. Beautiful descriptions here! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/24/2010 7:40:00 PM
HOw cool, Sara, the way you describe this phenomenon. I am not sure if I've ever seen such a thing, and it was green?? I really liked how you explained it. Very nicely penned. I think you do well with free verse LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/24/2010 7:02:00 PM
I have enjoyed reading you Free verse Sara. Smile, I am Glad it is God in charge aren't you? Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/24/2010 6:36:00 PM
did you see that tonight? It was not green when I saw it but was very big and the moon is big and bright!
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Date: 9/24/2010 6:06:00 PM
Powerful write Sara, much said...strong enjoyable poem...always Michael
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