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Star People

Star people Like diamonds of sky are the star people, Lending vivid colours to every paintbrush, With talent, hard work and diligence intertwined. But lives are being watched what they eat wherever go, Playing with tender emotions people intrude privacy, Measure for every action a debate is on. Crave to live ordinary and laugh free and loud, Miss roaming at will little things to be proud, Fading magnetic charm in freedom mesmerised. Hurt and darkness of solicitude in hearts of twinkling stars, Still bear sweet smiles transient as glow of fireflies, Humanity if touches alpine, Stars can you better define ? Written Dec 22nd, 2015 For contest "Star people" by Anthony Slausen Awarded 13th place win

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Date: 12/28/2015 11:16:00 PM
NICE
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Date: 12/28/2015 10:30:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congrats on your Star People win. SKAT
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Date: 12/27/2015 7:21:00 PM
Nice take on the theme, Dr. Upma. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/27/2015 1:39:00 PM
A lovely write and well deserved placement Upma!
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Date: 12/27/2015 11:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your having a great year with so many wins. Congratulations Dr, Sharma!
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Date: 12/22/2015 6:33:00 PM
gosh this sounds like a sci fi story, Upma!! An interesting take on the theme!
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Date: 12/22/2015 6:03:00 AM
Very nice poetry Dr. Thanks for sharing this.
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