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Star People

Child colored blue, What do you see in those vast eyes of yours? Pictured a black veil splattered with white, You with a wandering soul have no place here. Where is your mind, is it down here? Alongside the lonesome society screaming in your ear. Or is it way up high where the energy lies? With constellations radiating the light that your mind portrays. Living with a unique sense of being you lie, Harbor the night in the center of your heart, Feeling the sadness that should rip you apart, But not tonight for you sleep with ghosts, And you disappear back with the shadows. Are you still here, little child? Or are you once again dreaming beyond the clouds and stars my dear?

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Date: 9/16/2017 2:25:00 PM
Nice. Feels like an allegory. "living with a unique sense of being you lie" is a great line. Thanks for sharing...........peace!
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Charlotte Wong
Date: 9/16/2017 9:47:00 PM
Thank you so much for the comment! I appreciate it a lot. Wishing you a great day!
Date: 12/28/2015 11:12:00 PM
Charlotte, Congratulations on your nice win. ~LINDA~
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Charlotte Wong
Date: 1/2/2016 9:04:00 PM
Thank you so much! c':
Date: 12/28/2015 10:27:00 PM
nice win
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Charlotte Wong
Date: 1/2/2016 9:04:00 PM
Thank you! c:
Date: 12/28/2015 1:05:00 AM
Great take and a wonderful poetry Charlotte.. congrats on big win!
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Charlotte Wong
Date: 1/2/2016 9:04:00 PM
Thank you very much !!
Date: 12/27/2015 4:28:00 PM
Hi Charlotte, congratulations on your 2nd Place win for lovely poem with is wonderful take on the theme! Sandra
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Charlotte Wong
Date: 1/2/2016 9:03:00 PM
Thank you, this means a lot! I really enjoyed writing it!
Date: 12/27/2015 2:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Charlotte Wong
Date: 1/2/2016 9:03:00 PM
Thank you very much!!
Date: 12/27/2015 1:57:00 PM
A winning first post! Fabulous. Hopefully a sign of many many more great writes.
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Charlotte Wong
Date: 1/2/2016 9:02:00 PM
Thank you, this means a lot! I will try my best :D
Date: 12/20/2015 4:15:00 PM
Hi Charlotte, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Charlotte Wong
Date: 12/21/2015 7:32:00 PM
Thank you very much! I enjoy this community and site a lot and will continue writing! Many hugs!
Date: 12/20/2015 12:52:00 PM
An excellent poem Charlotte. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Charlotte Wong
Date: 12/21/2015 7:33:00 PM
Thank you very much :-)!
Date: 12/20/2015 10:14:00 AM
Charlotte, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Charlotte Wong
Date: 12/21/2015 7:32:00 PM
Thank you very much! I look forward to following your poetry entries too, this community is very warm :-)! Thank you and many hugs!!

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