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AUTHOR'S NOTES: The rhyming ABAB Couplet on "Star Light . . . Star Night" is actually the third poem in succession to two other previous poems I posted last month -- in August, to wit: "Cosmic Dust" and "Rainbow." "Star Light . . . Star Night," very similar to these other two poems, presently touches on another aspect of the so-called "God Theme" in the Universe. As with "Cosmic Dust" and "Rainbow," I thoroughly enjoyed writing this particular poem while further pondering ethereal concepts pertaining to certain heavenly and celestial images that have the ability and capacity to excite and enthrall the poetic imagination in most readers who have similar metaphorical interests. I do hope you enjoy reading this poem as much as I did writing it. Enjoy!! (Gary Bateman - September 14, 2014)

Star Light . . . Star Night Gazing at the dark sky backdrop on this cold black night, We are enraptured by the radiant view of bright Star-light. This is a wondrous sight to behold by all on this Star-night, Reflecting all earthly things gracious, grand, and right. The cold beckoning blackness of this very special night, Serves as the cosmic palette for unlimited points of light. The enchanting Star-light on this marvelous Star-night! This Star-night reflects God’s heavenly-made Star-light! At once we realize the divine dichotomy between light and night, On that mystical, magical eve filled with God’s Star-light. God himself implores all who see His mosaic of Star-light, To ponder ever gently too the dark beauty of His Star-night. Oh! Radiant and grand Star-light on this most special Star-night, We are forever spellbound by your God-given glorious sight. Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved, Schoeningen, Germany (September 14, 2014)

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/16/2015 5:42:00 PM

oooh, beautiful one, Gary!!! I love the third stanza in particular... excellent set of couplets...love the ethereal theme... it's always a delight to read. I also like this line: "To ponder ever gently too the dark beauty of His Star-night." To ponder gently... it's all so lovely! I'm happy to read your work today; it's very inspiring. Always, Laura

Gary Bateman
Date: 8/18/2015 12:20:00 PM

Thanks Laura for your visit here. I believe I wrote 3 or 4 of these moonlight and starlight couplet poems in the ABAB rhyming pattern. I enjoyed doing them and thought they were (and still are) great poems. But not too many people responded to them at that time. But I'm, of course, thrilled that you like this one very much. Cheers and Best, Gary

Paul Schneiter

Date: 9/25/2014 10:11:00 PM

Dear Gary, You have done some marvelous work, not the least of which is "Star Light Star Night." The imagery is stunning, and the message is compelling. It's a beautiful composition. Thanks for creating it and for sharing it. Blessings to you and your loved ones.

Gary Bateman
Date: 9/26/2014 5:41:00 AM

Hello Paul, Thanks for taking a read of "Star Light Star Night." I am really glad you enjoyed it. As I am boosting all of my writing activities, I am equally ramping up my reading of more poets (including yourself) in the PoetrySoup family. We all can learn so much from each other!! I will be one of your regular readers. Best Wishes to you and your family. -- Gary

Gene Bourne

Date: 9/15/2014 4:31:00 AM

Engaging format, using couplets for this authoratative, yet subtle journey. Your phrasing is striking, magnetic and pleasing. You maintain an ethereal atmosphere and draw the reader along with you...Gracefully and expertly composed...... Hoping all is well with you...Your friend.....Gene

Gary Bateman
Date: 9/15/2014 8:34:00 AM

A pleasure as always hearing from you Gene. Thanks so much for you very gracious and insightful comments. As you may have noticed, I've started branching out with other poetic formats and will continue to do so over time. I also hope all is well with you too. Best Wishes to you my friend. Cheers, Gary

James Horn

Date: 9/14/2014 7:56:00 PM

I wish I may, I wish I might, have this wish I wish tonight. The last two lines really make it into a great creation, needing no further explanation. Jim Horn

Gary Bateman
Date: 9/15/2014 3:11:00 AM

Thanks Jim. One has to have a crescendo at the end!! Cheers, Gary

Jan Allison

Date: 9/14/2014 6:06:00 PM

fabulous cosmic creation Gary I love the rhyme scheme and repetition:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Gary Bateman
Date: 9/15/2014 3:09:00 AM

Thank You Jan!! I guess I'm finding a place here with cosmic creation themes. Glad you liked it!! All the Best, Gary

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/14/2014 5:19:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this one..We don't think about the wonderful creation and what it took to bring it into being most of the time..It is amazing what miraculous events took place in the creation..Thanks for dropping by..I appreciate you commenting on my work..Owl(I'll) always love you a play on words..Welcome to soup..Your work adds it's own flavor to the soup now..Sara

Gary Bateman
Date: 9/14/2014 5:25:00 PM

Thanks Sara . . . The same mutual great feelings back to you!! I look forward to reading your works too over time. I am certainly not a ONE THEME PERSON. I write on any issue, theme, emotion, injustice, etc. that tickles my fancy. I will make sure my wife, Ingrid, sees your OWL poem. What a HOOT!! Cheers, Gary