Get Your Premium Membership

Star Falls

Blinded and scorched at first from the light and the heat truly now, I can begin to see your face and feel your heart Bathing in the soft warmth and glow of your beautiful smile now, I can see the miracle of a star falling, on my lonely world

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/13/2015 1:31:00 AM
A captivating piece. Lovelly
Login to Reply
Brown Avatar
David Brown
Date: 4/15/2015 6:55:00 PM
Thanks as always, Eileen. So glad that you liked it
Date: 4/12/2015 9:32:00 PM
Aww, this is sweet, thank you for sharing!
Login to Reply
Brown Avatar
David Brown
Date: 4/15/2015 6:54:00 PM
Thank you Ed

Book: Reflection on the Important Things