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Star Fall

Unified beneath the dome of star studded sky, man lies starring at stars fixed or falling. We wonder who has tossed these gems aside. Most singular He who has let these fly toward unknown destinations calling, unified beneath the dome of star studded sky. From California's forest gazers cry with ahh's and ohh's as they lie sprawling, we wonder who has tossed these gems aside. Shooting star have bewitched fair Holland's sky and danced to drums in Africa brawling, unified beneath the dome of star studded sky From mighty Perseus they oft seem to fly like fishermen we sit, glow lights trawling, we wonder who has tossed these gems aside. That the heaven rains for all, none can deny a gift of bold beauty mankind's calling. Unified beneath the dome of star studded sky we wonder who has tossed these gems aside.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/22/2012 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place, Debbie in Tirzah's contest, " Shooting Stars. " This is another masterpiece from your magic pen. I wish you continued success. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 8/21/2012 3:21:00 PM
Congrats on your win...Sara
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Date: 8/21/2012 3:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely villanelle. You are the master of these forms.
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Date: 8/21/2012 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie...hand salute!! :) **Mary**
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Date: 8/21/2012 5:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tirzah's "Shooting Stars" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/21/2012 4:05:00 AM
Two number ones i've read today, in this contest. excellent this is Debbie, a joy to read.
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Date: 8/21/2012 3:26:00 AM
Debbie who indeed, big congrats on your win..David
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Date: 8/21/2012 2:21:00 AM
a starry piece for the world to read, debbie--- congrats and huggs!
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Date: 8/21/2012 12:31:00 AM
Excellent and Wonderful piece from a great and impressive writer/poet.....Always unique..Debbie!,Good job...Congratulations on your superb win....Light and Love....
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Date: 8/20/2012 2:22:00 PM
I've said it before .....the theme of unification, is gold ! Loved it the first time, love reading it once again....congratulations!
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Date: 8/20/2012 1:53:00 PM
Congrats on your first place finish in my contest! Love it!~Tirzah~
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Date: 8/19/2012 8:13:00 AM
Good poem... reminds me of the Trolls trying to get the shiny baubles in the sky. You might like reading my "Trolls N Things"... it involves butterflies... your friend. Carol
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Date: 8/14/2012 4:53:00 PM
This is one of your very best in my opinion, Deb...love the unification theme...a true 'gem' of a poem! - Tim
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Date: 8/13/2012 10:24:00 PM
Man, you are on a roll. What vitamins you taking and for the love of mike, share 'em! Mean it. This is GOOOOOLD. Turn off the phone, lock the door and keep writing. What will spill from you next? And you know by know I don't gush unless gushing is merited. Hugs, Cyndi
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Date: 8/13/2012 10:25:00 PM
Dammit. LOL. You have me so stunned with images I forgot to say I'll be S-mailing you in few minutes.
Date: 8/13/2012 7:11:00 AM
amazing Debbie, the title Star, says alot about the poem and the poet.
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Date: 8/12/2012 8:51:00 PM
Unified beneath the dome of a star studded sky.......... wow....I love the theme of this beauty, and if only the world could remember.......we are ONE and the same! Awesome poem!
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Date: 8/12/2012 4:25:00 PM
Very nicely written Debbie.
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