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Star Fall

Unified beneath the dome of star studded sky,
man lies starring at stars fixed or falling.
We wonder who has tossed these gems aside. 

Most singular He who has let these fly
toward unknown destinations calling,
unified beneath the dome of star studded sky.

From California's forest gazers cry
with ahh's and ohh's as they lie sprawling, 
we wonder who has tossed these gems aside.

Shooting star have bewitched fair Holland's sky
and danced to drums in Africa brawling,
unified beneath the dome of star studded sky

From mighty Perseus they oft seem to fly
like fishermen we sit, glow lights trawling,  
we wonder who has tossed these gems aside.

That the heaven rains for all, none can deny
a gift of bold beauty mankind's calling.
Unified beneath the dome of star studded sky
we wonder who has tossed these gems aside.

Copyright © Debbie Guzzi

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  1. Date: 8/22/2012 10:02:00 AM
    Congratulations on your first place, Debbie in Tirzah's contest, " Shooting Stars. " This is another masterpiece from your magic pen. I wish you continued success. Hugs, Andrew.

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 3:21:00 PM
    Congrats on your win...Sara

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 3:18:00 PM
    Congratulations on your lovely villanelle. You are the master of these forms.

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 10:30:00 AM
    Congratulations Debbie...hand salute!! :) **Mary**

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 5:46:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Tirzah's "Shooting Stars" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 4:05:00 AM
    Two number ones i've read today, in this contest. excellent this is Debbie, a joy to read.

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 3:34:00 AM
    Superb write Debbie on Shooting stars. Congrats on a great win in this contest! Honored to be sharing the spot with you.

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 3:26:00 AM
    Debbie who indeed, big congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 2:21:00 AM
    a starry piece for the world to read, debbie--- congrats and huggs!

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 12:31:00 AM
    Excellent and Wonderful piece from a great and impressive writer/poet.....Always unique..Debbie!,Good job...Congratulations on your superb win....Light and Love....

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 2:22:00 PM
    I've said it before .....the theme of unification, is gold ! Loved it the first time, love reading it once again....congratulations!

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 1:53:00 PM
    Congrats on your first place finish in my contest! Love it!~Tirzah~

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 8:13:00 AM
    Good poem... reminds me of the Trolls trying to get the shiny baubles in the sky. You might like reading my "Trolls N Things"... it involves butterflies... your friend. Carol

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 4:53:00 PM
    This is one of your very best in my opinion, the unification theme...a true 'gem' of a poem! - Tim

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 10:24:00 PM
    Man, you are on a roll. What vitamins you taking and for the love of mike, share 'em! Mean it. This is GOOOOOLD. Turn off the phone, lock the door and keep writing. What will spill from you next? And you know by know I don't gush unless gushing is merited. Hugs, Cyndi

    MacMillan Avatar Cyndi MacMillan
    Date: 8/13/2012 10:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dammit. LOL. You have me so stunned with images I forgot to say I'll be S-mailing you in few minutes.
  1. Date: 8/13/2012 7:11:00 AM
    amazing Debbie, the title Star, says alot about the poem and the poet.

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 5:18:00 AM
    Great write Debbie. Loved your imagination and imagery! Good luck for the contest.

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 8:51:00 PM
    Unified beneath the dome of a star studded sky.......... wow....I love the theme of this beauty, and if only the world could remember.......we are ONE and the same! Awesome poem!

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 4:25:00 PM
    Very nicely written Debbie.