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Star Dusted Coffee

Sprinkled stardust in your coffee As I watched you sit next to me Sip and let the dust flow through As star light flows out of you Enhancement of your beauty Exposing the mystery Sprinkled stardust in your coffee As I watched you sit next to me Nette's Stardust in an Octelle contest I could not find the form on poetry soup. First attempt at this form, hopefully got it right. By Richard Lamoureux

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Skat A

Date: 7/18/2013 10:19:00 PM

I love your star dust winning poem. Congratulations! Luv* SKAT........ <3

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/19/2013 6:11:00 AM

Thanks again SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/16/2013 4:39:00 PM

Congrats on your unique winning work..Sara

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/19/2013 6:12:00 AM

Hi Sara, thanks for your thoughtful comments.

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/16/2013 12:27:00 PM

Congrats on your win my friend. A beautiful stardust enjoyed. Loved always, bl

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/19/2013 6:12:00 AM

Thanks BL

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/15/2013 11:38:00 PM

:) Congrats, Richard...Yes, it is good to be in such wonderful company! Glad to share this spot with you....Sweet dreams...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/16/2013 6:28:00 AM

My pleasure Eileen , it is an honor when it is with a poet as talented as yourself. ( and as nice as well)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/15/2013 7:02:00 PM

hi Richard congrats love your poem Shadow x smiles

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/16/2013 6:26:00 AM

Thanks Shadow, smiling back.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/14/2013 9:47:00 PM

I thought of this in a sort of twisted way... I imagined the stardust being the drug ecstasy... strange that it gave me an ominous effect??? Anyhow, I really like this verse. Always, Laura

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/15/2013 6:50:00 AM

Intresting thought upon retreading I can see how that could fit. Thanks for commenting.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/14/2013 2:43:00 PM

Very very sweet..Made me yearn for a cuppa : )

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/15/2013 6:51:00 AM

Thanks Charmaine.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/14/2013 9:27:00 AM

Passing through and read this briefly... kindly post as VERSE( as written in the rules), and repeat lines 1 and 2 in lines 7 and 8... best of luck, nice one,richard... my contest has only one entry left, go!.. :) hugggs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/14/2013 11:11:00 AM

Thanks Nette you are a sweetheart.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/14/2013 7:44:00 AM

Richard.....how beautifully sweet.....angel wings....I like that. :-D

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/14/2013 7:53:00 AM

Thanks, I found the form a bit restrictive but I think it turned out okay in the end.