Star Bright

pin points of light twinkle in her eyes can angels see light speed

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/21/2019 3:00:00 PM

this is so good, Richard. Wanted to check out one of your examples!

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/14/2016 7:34:00 AM

This is poetry for the soul..nourishing and enlightening with an everlasting effect. Truly divine :-) blessings, lynn p.s. a forever favourite

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/23/2016 10:17:00 PM

I should hope so ;) I like it...twinkle twinkle oh night star, in my eyes is where you are. there you shine looking back at me, and you speak to me your sweet poetry.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/24/2016 7:17:00 AM

You are the sweet one, thanks Casarah.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/21/2016 7:56:00 AM

:) can they indeed...Richard, nice questionku. I'm email you when I can. EYES are always a favorite theme of mine. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/21/2016 11:37:00 AM

Thanks, we'll talk soon.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2016 12:56:00 PM

awesome!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/19/2016 5:20:00 PM

Thanks Andrea.

Tim Smith

Date: 6/18/2016 7:34:00 PM

I bet they can...Have a happy Father's day Richard!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/18/2016 9:01:00 PM

You as well Tim. My son came home this weekend so it has been perfect!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/18/2016 4:52:00 AM

Very very sweet ,Rick.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/18/2016 7:54:00 AM

Thanks Charmaine.