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Star

you're like a star brightening my life shooting across my darkened sky fixing my broken mind,you're so beautiful you bring tears to my eyes you've opened my heart, helped me see that there is so much more to life then i thought they could ever be you make me smile like I've never smiled before my whole world comes to life when i see your face when i hear your voice i just wanna hold you near i wanna hold you for the rest of my years i wanna wake up in the morning and the first thing i wanna see is you lieing next to me you are the star that has brightened my life you are the star that has lightened my sky

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Date: 3/30/2022 9:22:00 AM
This a a lovely poem.
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Date: 1/25/2016 5:04:00 PM
BECKY, Excellent written poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **
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Date: 1/24/2011 3:55:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Becky. Please continue to write you will do very well. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. Love, Carol
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