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The star sharpened, quietly bright, as shadows darkened into night, a point of shining light that guides three kings to where the child abides. They visited, arrayed with treasure, gold and incense for his pleasure; poor tokens for a life of trial exemplifying self-denial. A man above, a man apart, beloved of God with hardly time to steel his heart; a man who sacrificed his soul to make the unrepentant whole. He took Mary for his lover, she was caring, and sought cover to conceal his dissolution, (a passion pure, no need of absolution.) The star that consecrated birth no longer smiles upon the earth; he wept for us upon the cross and every day we mourn his loss.

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Date: 3/7/2009 2:09:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Keith. This flows so smoothly and the rhyme is perfect! "Poor tokens for a life of trial" so true my friend. Lovely poetry! Love and hugs, Robin
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Date: 3/5/2009 11:33:00 AM
Beautiful, paints pictures so clear. Keep it up. ~Jese
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Date: 3/1/2009 10:55:00 AM
Keith, this was a timely read for me right now as Easter approaches. Like you, I "mourn his loss," but I also give thanks for his sacrifice. Truly inspirational! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/17/2009 10:36:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Keith! This feels pure and entire in its celestial simplicity. Not complex nor complicated....solely a was and is. A magnificent accolade of hope and Faith. Wonderfully powerful piece, Keith! Wishing you the best! Blessings to you and yours...Love, Mikki
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